- 14/10/2025
- Kay Tabone
- I wrote about the time my class painted a mural. I wanted to show how surprised we all were and how amazing it looked at the end. Next time, I want to work on my spelling and make my sentences clearer. I enjoyed writing this because it reminded me of a fun day at school.
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What you did well:
Strong emotion: You showed shock, excitement, and amazement.
Clear sequence of events: You explained what happened first, next, and at the end.
Creative idea: The mural turning out like an elephant was a great twist! - Collaboration
- Understands different forms of communication and their features
Badge name: Master communicator Badge 
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What to improve:
Clarity: Sometimes the sentences run together. Adding full stops (periods) will make your ideas clearer.
Detail: You could add a few more describing words—What colours did you use? How big was the wall?
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