- 14/10/2025
- Ivy Grech
- I liked writing this story because it was fun to imagine the whole class working together on a big mural. I think I did well describing the birthday surprise for the art teacher. Next time, I want to add more details about how the mural looked and how the teacher reacted.
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What you did well:
Great storyline: The idea of making a mural as a birthday surprise is creative and sweet.
Clear sequence: You explained the project, the preparation, and the surprise ending in a logical order.
Nice descriptive details: Mentioning hearts, stars, and candles makes the mural sound colorful and fun. - Collaboration
- Understands different forms of communication and their features
Badge name: Master communicator Badge 
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What can be improved:
Spelling and Grammar
Sentence Structure: Some sentences are too long. Use commas or break them into shorter sentences for clarity.
Add more description: What colors were used? How big was the mural? How did the teacher react—did she smile, clap, or say something? Adding these details will make the story more vivid.
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