Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Kay Tabone Student's Comments: I wrote about the time my class painted a mural. I wanted to show how surprised we all were and how amazing it looked at the end. Next time, I want to work on my spelling and make my sentences clearer. I enjoyed writing this […]
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Alex Sant Fournier Student's Comments: I liked writing this story because it was fun to imagine someone collecting robot parts for many years. I think I did well describing the junkyard and how the character sneaked in to get the battery. Next time, I want to add more details
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Beppe Fino Student's Comments: I enjoyed writing this piece because I liked imagining all the children painting the mural together. I think I described the garden mural well, especially when it turned beautiful at the end. Evidence: u99-Beple-Fino-compressed Teacher's Comments: What you did well: Clear idea: You explained the
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Beppe Guillaumier Student's Comments: I liked writing this story because I enjoyed imagining the engineer building a robot step by step. I think I did well describing the different shapes and parts he used. Next time, I want to work on making my sentences flow better and adding more
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Ivy Grech Student's Comments: I liked writing this story because it was fun to imagine the whole class working together on a big mural. I think I did well describing the birthday surprise for the art teacher. Next time, I want to add more details about how the mural
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Giorgio Spina Student's Comments: I enjoyed writing this story because I like inventing things and imagining robots. I think I did well with the ideas and making the story fun. Next time, I also want to add more feelings to make the story more interesting. Evidence: u99-Giorgio-Spina-72-compressed Teacher's Comments:
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Sophie Grima Student's Comments: I enjoyed writing this story because I liked making it exciting, especially the part where Timmy presses the mysterious button. I think I did well describing Uncle Vic’s house and the study because I wanted the reader to imagine it clearly. Next time, I want
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Date: 14/10/2025 Student's Name and Surname: Ella Grima Student's Comments: I enjoyed writing this story because I liked imagining the inventor and the puppet coming to life. I think I did well in describing the characters and making the ending exciting. Evidence: u99-Ella-Grima-compressed Teacher's Comments: What’s great about this piece: Creative storyline: The idea of
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