- 14/10/2025
- Ivy Grech
- I liked writing this story because it was fun to imagine the whole class working together on a big mural. I think I did well describing the birthday surprise for the art teacher. Next time, I want to add more details about how the mural looked and how the teacher reacted.
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What you did well:
Great storyline: The idea of making a mural as a birthday surprise is creative and sweet.
Clear sequence: You explained the project, the preparation, and the surprise ending in a logical order.
Nice descriptive details: Mentioning hearts, stars, and candles makes the mural sound colorful and fun. - Сарадња
- Познаје различите облике комуникације и њихове карактеристике
Име беџа: Мајстор комуникације Беџ 
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What can be improved:
Spelling and Grammar
Sentence Structure: Some sentences are too long. Use commas or break them into shorter sentences for clarity.
Add more description: What colors were used? How big was the mural? How did the teacher react—did she smile, clap, or say something? Adding these details will make the story more vivid.
Финансиран од стране Европске уније. Међутим, изнети ставови припадају само аутору (ауторима) и не одражавају нужно ставове Европске уније или Европске извршне агенције за образовање и културу (EACEA). Ни Европска унија, ни EACEA не могу да носе за њих одговорност.