- 14/10/2025
- Alex Sant Fournier
- I liked writing this story because it was fun to imagine someone collecting robot parts for many years. I think I did well describing the junkyard and how the character sneaked in to get the battery. Next time, I want to add more details about what the robotic suit looks like and what it can do.
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What you did well:
Creative storyline: The idea of collecting pieces for years and sneaking into a junkyard for the final part is exciting and imaginative.
Clear goal: The story explains the challenge (finding the battery) and the success (building the suit).
Good ending: “That’s the story of how the first robotic suit was made” wraps it up nicely. - Креативност
- Користи на одговарајући и креативни начин језик и стил
Име беџа: Архитекта речи Беџ 
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What can be improved:
Add more description: What did the robotic suit look like? How did the child feel when he succeeded? Adding these details would make the story more vivid.
Consistency: The story starts with “a child” but later says “he was twenty-eight.” That’s confusing—maybe say “a young inventor” instead.
Финансиран од стране Европске уније. Међутим, изнети ставови припадају само аутору (ауторима) и не одражавају нужно ставове Европске уније или Европске извршне агенције за образовање и културу (EACEA). Ни Европска унија, ни EACEA не могу да носе за њих одговорност.