- 14/10/2025
- Beppe Guillaumier
- I liked writing this story because I enjoyed imagining the engineer building a robot step by step. I think I did well describing the different shapes and parts he used. Next time, I want to work on making my sentences flow better and adding more feelings or reactions from the characters.
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What’s great about this piece:
Imagination: The idea of an inventor creating a robot is creative and exciting.
Detail: You included lots of descriptive details about the parts and the process, which helps the reader picture the scene.
Structure: The story has a clear beginning (setting the scene), middle (the building process), and end (the result). - Креативност
- Користи на одговарајући и креативни начин језик и стил
Име беџа: Архитекта речи Беџ 
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What can be improved:
Word Choice: Instead of repeating words like “pieces” and “made,” try using synonyms (e.g., “components,” “constructed”).
Clarity: Explain why the inventor is making the robot earlier in the story to give the reader a purpose.
Show, don’t tell: Instead of saying “extraordinary and amazing,” describe what makes it extraordinary (e.g., “It could move and talk like a real person”).
Финансиран од стране Европске уније. Међутим, изнети ставови припадају само аутору (ауторима) и не одражавају нужно ставове Европске уније или Европске извршне агенције за образовање и културу (EACEA). Ни Европска унија, ни EACEA не могу да носе за њих одговорност.