{"id":3722,"date":"2026-02-03T10:42:16","date_gmt":"2026-02-03T10:42:16","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/en\/submissions\/3722-42-16\/"},"modified":"2026-02-03T10:42:16","modified_gmt":"2026-02-03T10:42:16","slug":"the-inventors-desk-2","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/submissions\/3722-42-16\/","title":{"rendered":"The Inventor&#8217;s Desk"},"content":{"rendered":"<ul class=\"wpuf_customs\"><li><label>\u0414\u0430\u0442\u0443\u043c<\/label> 14\/10\/2025<\/li>            <li class=\"wpuf-field-data wpuf-field-data-text_field\">\n                                    <label>\u0418\u043c\u0435 \u0438 \u043f\u0440\u0435\u0437\u0438\u043c\u0435 \u0443\u0447\u0435\u043d\u0438\u043a\u0430<\/label>\n                                Sophie Grima            <\/li>\n                    <li class=\"wpuf-field-data wpuf-field-data-textarea_field\">\n                                   <label>\u041a\u043e\u043c\u0435\u043d\u0442\u0430\u0440\u0438 \u0443\u0447\u0435\u043d\u0438\u043a\u0430:<\/label>\n                               I enjoyed writing this story because I liked making it exciting, especially the part where Timmy presses the mysterious button. I think I did well describing Uncle Vic\u2019s house and the study because I wanted the reader to imagine it clearly. Next time, I want to add even more details about the robot and what happens after Uncle Vic comes in. I\u2019m proud of my ending because it makes people want to read the next part!\n            <\/li>\n         <li><label>\u0414\u043e\u043a\u0430\u0437:<\/label> <a href=\"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/02\/u99-Sophie-grima-7.2-compressed.pdf\">u99-Sophie-grima-7.2-compressed<\/a> <\/li>            <li class=\"wpuf-field-data wpuf-field-data-textarea_field\">\n                                   <label>\u041a\u043e\u043c\u0435\u043d\u0442\u0430\u0440 \u043d\u0430\u0441\u0442\u0430\u0432\u043d\u0438\u043a\u0430:<\/label>\n                               What you did well:\nGreat suspense: The ending with \u201cTO BE CONTINUED\u201d makes the reader want to know what happens next.<br \/>\nImaginative details: Describing the old house with vines and the study full of books creates a vivid picture.<br \/>\nGood use of dialogue and action: \u201cThey said their hellos\u201d and \u201cTimmy pushed the button\u201d make the story lively.\n            <\/li>\n                     <li class=\"wpuf-field-data wpuf-field-data-dropdown_field\">\n                                    <label>\u0414\u0438\u0441\u043f\u043e\u0437\u0438\u0446\u0438\u0458\u0430:<\/label>\n                                \u041a\u0440\u0435\u0430\u0442\u0438\u0432\u043d\u043e\u0441\u0442            <\/li>\n                    <li class=\"wpuf-field-data wpuf-field-data-dropdown_field\">\n                                    <label>\u0418\u043d\u0434\u0438\u043a\u0430\u0442\u043e\u0440 \u0437\u0430 \u0434\u0438\u0441\u043f\u043e\u0437\u0438\u0446\u0438\u0458\u0443<\/label>\n                                \u041a\u043e\u0440\u0438\u0441\u0442\u0438 \u043d\u0430 \u043e\u0434\u0433\u043e\u0432\u0430\u0440\u0430\u0458\u0443\u045b\u0438 \u0438 \u043a\u0440\u0435\u0430\u0442\u0438\u0432\u043d\u0438 \u043d\u0430\u0447\u0438\u043d \u0458\u0435\u0437\u0438\u043a \u0438 \u0441\u0442\u0438\u043b             <\/li>\n        <li class=\"iscu_badge_field\"><table style=\"width:100%\">\n  <tr>\n    <td style=\"width:40%; text-align: left;\"><\/td>\n    <td style=\"width:60%; text-align: center;\"><b>\u0418\u043c\u0435 \u0431\u0435\u045f\u0430: \u0410\u0440\u0445\u0438\u0442\u0435\u043a\u0442\u0430 \u0440\u0435\u0447\u0438<\/b><\/td>\n  <\/tr>\n<\/table>\n<table style=\"width:100%\">\n  <tr>\n    <td style=\"width:40%; text-align: left;\"><b>\u0411\u0435\u045f<\/b><\/td>\n    <td style=\"width:60%; text-align: center;\">\n      <img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/03\/35.png\" style=\"width:300px;height:300px;\">\n    <\/td>\n  <\/tr>\n<\/table>\n<\/li>            <li class=\"wpuf-field-data wpuf-field-data-textarea_field\">\n                                   <label>\u041f\u0440\u0435\u043f\u043e\u0440\u0443\u043a\u0435 \u043d\u0430\u0441\u0442\u0430\u0432\u043d\u0438\u043a\u0430:<\/label>\n                               What can be improved:\nSpelling and Grammar: Watch out for words like \u201csuprised\u201d (should be \u201csurprised\u201d), \u201cwen\u201d (should be \u201cwhen\u201d), and \u201chousers\u201d (should be \u201chouses\u201d).<br \/>\nSentence Structure: Some sentences are too short or repetitive. Combine ideas for smoother flow. For example:<br \/>\nOriginal: \u201cThere was also a small rusty gate. They walked inside.\u201d<br \/>\nImproved: \u201cBeyond the small rusty gate, they walked inside the house.\u201d<br \/>\nAdd more description: What did the robot look like? Was it scary, shiny, or broken? Adding these details will make the story even more exciting.\n            <\/li>\n         <\/ul>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Date: 14\/10\/2025 Student&#039;s Name and Surname: Sophie Grima Student&#039;s Comments: I enjoyed writing this story because I liked making it exciting, especially the part where Timmy presses the mysterious button. I think I did well describing Uncle Vic\u2019s house and the study because I wanted the reader to imagine it clearly. Next time, I want [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":99,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"site-sidebar-layout":"default","site-content-layout":"","ast-site-content-layout":"default","site-content-style":"default","site-sidebar-style":"default","ast-global-header-display":"","ast-banner-title-visibility":"","ast-main-header-display":"","ast-hfb-above-header-display":"","ast-hfb-below-header-display":"","ast-hfb-mobile-header-display":"","site-post-title":"","ast-breadcrumbs-content":"","ast-featured-img":"","footer-sml-layout":"","ast-disable-related-posts":"","theme-transparent-header-meta":"","adv-header-id-meta":"","stick-header-meta":"","header-above-stick-meta":"","header-main-stick-meta":"","header-below-stick-meta":"","astra-migrate-meta-layouts":"default","ast-page-background-enabled":"default","ast-page-background-meta":{"desktop":{"background-color":"","background-image":"","background-repeat":"repeat","background-position":"center center","background-size":"auto","background-attachment":"scroll","background-type":"","background-media":"","overlay-type":"","overlay-color":"","overlay-opacity":"","overlay-gradient":""},"tablet":{"background-color":"","background-image":"","background-repeat":"repeat","background-position":"center center","background-size":"auto","background-attachment":"scroll","background-type":"","background-media":"","overlay-type":"","overlay-color":"","overlay-opacity":"","overlay-gradient":""},"mobile":{"background-color":"","background-image":"","background-repeat":"repeat","background-position":"center center","background-size":"auto","background-attachment":"scroll","background-type":"","background-media":"","overlay-type":"","overlay-color":"","overlay-opacity":"","overlay-gradient":""}},"ast-content-background-meta":{"desktop":{"background-color":"var(--ast-global-color-5)","background-image":"","background-repeat":"repeat","background-position":"center center","background-size":"auto","background-attachment":"scroll","background-type":"","background-media":"","overlay-type":"","overlay-color":"","overlay-opacity":"","overlay-gradient":""},"tablet":{"background-color":"var(--ast-global-color-5)","background-image":"","background-repeat":"repeat","background-position":"center center","background-size":"auto","background-attachment":"scroll","background-type":"","background-media":"","overlay-type":"","overlay-color":"","overlay-opacity":"","overlay-gradient":""},"mobile":{"background-color":"var(--ast-global-color-5)","background-image":"","background-repeat":"repeat","background-position":"center center","background-size":"auto","background-attachment":"scroll","background-type":"","background-media":"","overlay-type":"","overlay-color":"","overlay-opacity":"","overlay-gradient":""}},"footnotes":""},"categories":[138],"tags":[331],"class_list":["post-3722","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-san-anton-2025-26-christiana-f","tag-sophie-grima"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3722","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/99"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3722"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3722\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3723,"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3722\/revisions\/3723"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3722"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3722"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.boostbadges.com\/sr\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3722"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}